EDIT: Okay, after a minor creative conflict, we've decided to try the turtles with multiple gray-toned bandannas. This is another way to help you, the reader, identify which turtle is which, in addition to the subtleties already implemented, like their spots, bandanna ends, builds, and snouts. Each gray tone is assigned based on the chroma value of the original bandanna color. Donny's purple is shown in dark gray, Raph's red in medium gray, Leo's blue in light gray, and Mikey's orange in white. The colors were digitally implemented for this page, but will be done manually in the inking stage after this.
Kind of funny that the most thinking I've had to put in to this comic so far has involved doughnut continuity
The script explicitly states that Mikey has five. The security guard had one already, and the box needed to be empty by the time the turtles went through.
...And who ever heard of a nine-pack of doughnuts?
Well, now you have!
I have too much free time, apparently.
Comments
BlueFire Says:
your really good at drawing!
Shanoshi Says:
Oh man, that cop must be having a heart attack from lack of donuts.
The Wise Mankey Says:
I had no idea they liked donuts so much that they'll steal them. >.>
foolyguy Says:
The turtles first full appearance is of them...eating doughnuts?
I just find that comical considering the buildup implied by the other pages, still the tension is well set, and leaves me curious for whats gonna happen yet.
This page is still awesome, but your second panel, you got messy with the geometry within the panel outside of the security guard.
This is also more a personal note than a real critique, but I personally couldn't separate the third panel from the forth (I thought the third and forth were one panel) and couldn't decipher what was happening there. I don't consider that poor craftsmanship though really, just my lack of perception.
A final note with this page in particular was that things are looking a little more gray here than normal. Perhaps that is to be expected considering that they're like in a dark building, however I think messing with the contrast in Photoshop or the 'Curves' would really help the turtles in particular pop out more.
Fei Lynn Says:
but it was like.. REALLY super cool looking with like... colors in their bandannas! D:
Dykrentsu Says:
Nice! I'm really likin this comic series.