Lonely

by beethovenbd

in poems

Lonely

Lonely

Teardrops falling from my face,
Teardrops mixed with rain.
The wind mixes up my hair
The chill makes me cringe.

Slowly I wander about
Slowly I ponder the things
Still not knowing rationally what to do
Softly I start to sob

Harsh are the thoughts in my mind
Harsh like the gusts cutting in my face
Hope seems to be windswept away
Heaven promised but never granted.

Listening to the beat of my pulse
Listening to the sobs from my chest
Longing for love that isn’t there
Lonely walking about, unwanted,unaware.

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Mar 10th 2009
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A poem I made yesterday. I do feel better already though <3...writing always helps.

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Lora Chan Says:

*huggles* Its a wonderful poem.

SallyMusic Says:

This is a very sad, and moving poem. I'm glad you're feeling better, I believe that the best way to expel these kind of feelings is to get them down on paper, or in a song!

Starspell Says:

Very moving indeed - I'm glad that you can vent in such a beautiful way ^^

Parva lupa Says:

*hug* Nice poem, glad you're feeling better.