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by Thylaco

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Feb 16th 2009
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wolf fantasy comic anthro eagle bird mag
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Once again many thanks to Bloodshine, she transform my baby english to something magical, I am very greatfule, asante sana :glomp:
Tack så jätte mycket!!!!

Text Concept by Thylaco. Text Edited by VC BloodShine.

Terania page 2

Sorry about the delay but my trip to kenya took some time ;)
This is the 2 page in my fantasy wolf comic Terania
I have about 13 pages that is already sketched. It is a kind of a graphic novel. :)

the plot is about my main char Windshade (reef in my gallery)

psc2, wacom tablet, and some lines by hand,
Anna.I.M. Bernvi (copyright) 09

Comments

brandi3981 Says:

cool ^^ particularly the glowy lines threw the one wolf dude, i assume thats the healy power

as for the description, I really, even if it was short comic wouldn't be an oppriate word cause its not meant to be funny but it would of been a word u r stuck with... graphic novel fits much better

Lark Pash Says:

Very cool layout. It looks really neat.

shayde wolf Says:

awesome, im lookin forward to more :3:gangshake:

Heiges Says:

Yay! Greatness!

VCBloodShine Says:

Looking good :D
Glad to help again :)
I love the wolf with the blue glowies...
It's awesome looking!
Nice work :)

You might want to remove the quotation marks (the " things) from the beginning of the text in the second and fourth panels.
Also, I think I made a typo:
"...the Keepers were becoming the nothing more than the hardened tools..."
Yeah, that bold "the" shouldn't be there.
My bad if it was my typo ;p
Otherwise, it looks great :)
Excellent work, looking forward to the next page ;p

FalnAnglYin Says:

your effects are awesome, my friend! Also, your writing has gotten better! Well done! I can't wait till the next page!:-3

Tree Says:

looking good! can't wait for the next page :)

hbilley Says:

awesome!

FlamEdgeSlasha Says:

Oh wow this looks awesome!