man
this is by far the most uninteresting peice I've seen on the FP in a while
standard pose
generic name with no real connection to the picture
DODGE
AND
BURN TOOL
generic 'paintings' section EVEN THOUGH IT'S NOT A PAINTING
generic clothes folding
you know what this is all just too generic for words
In fact if I had the chance to I would destyroy your computers hardrive and wipe this from the internet so no one would ever be tormented by its mind numbing standard-levelnes.
sadly, I cannot.
so I guess it's a happy day for the hundreds of people with no taste in socks, huh?
Alright, I didn’t saw anything against critics, so I hope you don’t mind if I give it a shot.
First off, what is going on with the composition? This is so cramped up there is no place for the eyes to travels and feast on any details in particular. Which element you wanted to make important: the wings or the person? Because as it is, I can’t tell. It’s just one big chuck of mass in the small available space.
I really like the textures on the wings. You can use them very well. The swirls balance well the strips on the girl’s shirt. But... what is up with those wings shape? They look more like exploding feathers out of her back than solid wings with flesh and bones under all the feathers.
You used a nice harmony of purple unitone which gave a somewhat melancoly atmosphere (to me anyway haha) I like that you shaded the skin with the same tone. Maybe you could have used a tonic color on the skin to make the purple pop out more, this is only a suggestion. It work really well with the piece. But what is up with the highlight? The wings are receiving the lights from above while the girl is receiving the light in the front. If the wings themselves glow, then why isn’t there some reflecting lights in the hair?
If they aren’t glowing, then my bad. I can get a bit confused by people’s use of such sharp lighting colors.
Don't listen to a word Mundi Pace says, this is a wonderful work of art. I love all of the swirls you put into her wings and how you did the clothing. It's simple but it works.
I am definitely favoriting this. Great job on the art and congrats on the front page :3
Her hand is much too small and her ear seems a bit too pushed back.
Also, where is the connection from her left hand? The right arm covers the hand a little and at the other end the left arm is not drawn.
Comments
CuriousLiLi Says:
She has my socks on her arms!!!
But seriously, this is amazing!
Mundi Pace Says:
man
this is by far the most uninteresting peice I've seen on the FP in a while
standard pose
generic name with no real connection to the picture
DODGE
AND
BURN TOOL
generic 'paintings' section EVEN THOUGH IT'S NOT A PAINTING
generic clothes folding
you know what this is all just too generic for words
In fact if I had the chance to I would destyroy your computers hardrive and wipe this from the internet so no one would ever be tormented by its mind numbing standard-levelnes.
sadly, I cannot.
so I guess it's a happy day for the hundreds of people with no taste in socks, huh?
unholydragon Says:
Alright, I didn’t saw anything against critics, so I hope you don’t mind if I give it a shot.
First off, what is going on with the composition? This is so cramped up there is no place for the eyes to travels and feast on any details in particular. Which element you wanted to make important: the wings or the person? Because as it is, I can’t tell. It’s just one big chuck of mass in the small available space.
I really like the textures on the wings. You can use them very well. The swirls balance well the strips on the girl’s shirt. But... what is up with those wings shape? They look more like exploding feathers out of her back than solid wings with flesh and bones under all the feathers.
You used a nice harmony of purple unitone which gave a somewhat melancoly atmosphere (to me anyway haha) I like that you shaded the skin with the same tone. Maybe you could have used a tonic color on the skin to make the purple pop out more, this is only a suggestion. It work really well with the piece. But what is up with the highlight? The wings are receiving the lights from above while the girl is receiving the light in the front. If the wings themselves glow, then why isn’t there some reflecting lights in the hair?
If they aren’t glowing, then my bad. I can get a bit confused by people’s use of such sharp lighting colors.
xcarebear13x Says:
Don't listen to a word Mundi Pace says, this is a wonderful work of art. I love all of the swirls you put into her wings and how you did the clothing. It's simple but it works.
I am definitely favoriting this. Great job on the art and congrats on the front page :3
Mundi Pace Says:
YEAH
THAT'S RIGHT
WHAT UD SAID
BITCH
Dark Velox Says:
Her hand is much too small and her ear seems a bit too pushed back.
Also, where is the connection from her left hand? The right arm covers the hand a little and at the other end the left arm is not drawn.
Just had to point it out since it was bugging me.
vampire kitty duiva Says:
Ohh, this is so beautiful. It has such a nice, calming effect when you look at it...
Sweetyluli Says:
D: Just a sketch D:
Sasodei90 Says:
amazing! really good
Dawn42 Says:
So pretty!