Destiney: chapter 1 The Club

by angel1212

in Destiny

Destiney: chapter 1 The Club

People call it fate. I call it luck. But I Should tell you the story from the beginning.
“Hey Angel!” yelled my best friend Ellie. “Let’s go to the new club to night!”
Ellie is like one of those models, tall, tan and blond, and very active. Unlike me, I’m short have black hair with blue hi-lights and I must be one of the whitest person in the Montana City, Montana. We have been friends since forever!
“Please go with me?” Ellie pleaded.
“FINE!!” I finally gave in.
“Yes! I knew you were going to give in,” Ellie says. ”How about around six.”
“Okay, but what should I ware?”
“Dark,” she said with no emotion.
“Okay that won’t be hard.” since that is all I have. Also did I mention we are almost nothing alike, she does cheerleading and that kind of stuff I only go to cheer her on. She wears preppy stuff I ware darker stuff. Also I always ware a neck-less, it is chains with a garnet attached.
After that I’m off to my car. It’s an old car, and it is small so I hope I never have to take anyone anywhere in it. Also I’ve got little money, so that is why I don’t have a brand-new car.

When I got home lunged for my bedroom. I picked out a navy blue t-shirt and my blue jeans. I ran to my bathroom and put on my black lipstick and after that I brushed my hair.

I went to my fridge and grabbed my pop and sat down on the couch. “ I can’t believe it has been a year since the accident.” Then I must of doze off because out of no where my phone vibrated, and guess who that was.




“Hey Ellie, give me one sec” I put my pop away and ran out to see her in a new silver Mercedes in front. “are you for real?”
“when did you get this?” I asked. “Did your daddy buy it?”
“Yeah, he bought it yesterday!” she smiled evilly.
“So where is this new club?”
“You will find out” the smile not moving, “btw nice outfit.”
“Thanks.” Then we Finally got there. She parked right in front of the club.
“when we finally got in we go for the first stool table. The music was so loud!
“So how do you like the club?” Ellie asked.
“love it.” I said. She was so shocked, I could not but laugh.
“Hey I’m going to get a drink, do you want anything?” Ellie asked.
“Blood, no, but I would like anything.”
“Kay. Be back soon.”
When she left a tall, black shaggy hair, almost whiter than me pale guy walked over to me. He also had crimson red eyes.
“Hi I’m Cecil, yeah I know it is weird but it is unique!” he said.
“I’m angel, and no it is not a nickname, but I like your name better it is funnier” I giggled.
“would you like to dance?”
“sure but can we wait for my friend so she knows. She is my way home.” I requested.
“okay, one thing have we met before?”
“I don’t think so.”
“do you have a twin?”
“uh yeah how did you know?” This was really weird because she died and she looked nothing like me.
“Hey who’s the hottie?” Ellie walks up and asks. Half making me jump.
“I’m Cecil, I’m going to steal angel for a dance, if that is okay.” he said sounding like a gentleman.
“ha, good luck you will need it. She can’t dance!” she was so evil and mean to me.
He laughed a little but not in a mean way. “I will get her to dance” he smiled in an evil way. But all I could do was laugh.
Hours must have past because the music was getting quieter. Also ellie looded really drunk by the table and guys started to swarm her. “those pervs!” I thought.

“Sorry but I got to go get her before she gets hurt. Call me later.” I wrote my number really fast and very sloppy. I hope he can read messy writing. Then I ran to Ellie. “Get off her you pervs!!”
“We are not doing anything she does not want” said one of the vultures.
“And she is drunk! Get off her or else!” and then I grabbed her arm and yanked her out of the crowd.
“Ouch that hurt!” Ellie wined.
“it is for your good!” I yelled and we ran out of the club, “Where is the keys?”
“here” I grabbed the keys out of her hands and I pushed her in the back seats of her new car. I step on the gas so I could get home fast and go to sleep.
“you will be staying at my place for the night, or we don’t know what will happen to you!” so I dragged her out and pushed her

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Jan 24th 2009
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first of angel is not the same angel i always use. it is about a girl, her friend, and her Mysteries male friend. also if u don't like it than don't say anything and vote down on it!!

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kana 4 Says:

It's a good plot line...
but people might think Jasper's from twilight(Uhg, we cant even use the name in there anymore...)
also, tryt o drag it out a little more!
otherwise, good job!!