A Love Poem

by KIKI spirit

in Completed Works

A Love Poem

Another sucky love poem
by another broken lover.
Another few meaningless words,
read by another poor few eyes.
Uncreative and dead to me,
even as I sat writing it.
So I did the best thing to do:
I crumpled it up, tight and sad.
Then I tore it to pieces,
and at last I threw it away.
Instead, I would write a poem
about writing stupid poems.

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Jan 22nd 2009
Tags:
critique experimental humor kiki love narrative poem satirical
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I actually punctuated this one!

Comments

Rieal Dragonsbane Says:

Haha! I wasn't expecting that! I like it!

AuroranWolf Says:

God, that's magical. And so ironic.

luckykittymini Says:

Very good. =)

WolfRosell Says:

it's a bit malicous to all the people who got together because of love poems... but, it's awesome!! ^^