Chapter one: The Travel

by tjtum15

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Chapter one: The Travel

Taylor looking around yawning as he got to a point of no rest his seal shocking him “Damn it…” looking for a good spot to take a rest “… my first mission in weeks and my stupid seal is all ready acting up…” although it was a Rank-S mission this was just children play for him “All rank A Guys that’s too easy to bad I am not going after Itachi.” Sighing looking around focusing his chakara “Dragon eyes.” Using a small amount of chakara so his seal didn’t shock him “okay at 3:45 PM a squad of ninjas went through here two A rank Rouge Ninjas still small fries to me and a B Rank.” Taking his note pad out writing it down looking around.
His seal stared to shock him as he relaxed his chakara “that was a close one.” Glad that he caught it in time following the chakara trail seeing a small village being attacked “there is my target.” Coming in on his chakara dragon wings like a phantom with a small smirk that could only be seen of a half a millisecond the Rouge ninjas looked around as he chuckled they throw Kunai and Shurikens at Taylor.
“It’s the Dragon of the Leaf Village!” said the first A rank rouge ninja as Taylor appeared in front of them.
They started to back up “he is so fast.” Said the Rank B Rouge Ninja the two A ranked ones throw jutsu after jutsu at Taylor getting only one good hit enough to give him a good injury. Taylor chuckling “My Turn.” He started to do some hand signs “Dragon, Rabbit, Monkey, Dragon, Horse, Rat, Dragon….” His chakara formed into his hand “Dragon Fang no Jutsu!” the dragon wings like chakara appeared as he ran slashing the three of them with his hand “Good bye you Villains.” A medical ninja joined Taylor “Sir are you all right?” Taylor just looked at the medical ninja and started his journey back to the leaf village as three ninjas passed him to do their mission it was Kakashi’s team.

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Jan 20th 2009
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Finally chapter one is complet as I said in the prolouge.

But this is for an entry as well... (if she will take it.)

so enjoy but dont bash or smash or pick at my spelling I hate that.

Chapter one is one of the short chapters... Chapter two working on so hold your horses.

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Vulpix the Lonely Says:

A bit confusing but it's okay. You still need to work on it though.

Shadow Dinosaur Says:

You should seperate the explain words and the character dialogue so it easier to read. Not bad though.