EDIT (Text Concept by Thylaco. Text Edited by VC BloodShine.)
She is very helpfule and I can´t understand how nice she is to help me, I will do a giftart for you, asante sana
PLEASE COMMENT IF YOU FAVE, i WANT TO KNOW WHY YOU FAV OR WHY YOU DON´T FAVE
Ah well here is the first prolque page of 2 pages.
It is fantasy wolf comic. Don´t got the name yet becasue I want something new and orginal name that fits my story.
I may redraw the secound panel later.
I have about 15 pages skecthed, i had 18 but I delete 3, no longer desired. I will try to finish the secound page next week. Or atleast I will put up some pictures of my main char Windshade.
Story, characters, backgrounds, text (with some help of my father) and all: A.I.M. Bernvi (C) 09 (Thylaco)
Comments
brandi3981 Says:
nice idea... nice graphics for lack of a better word... also the only icon in the discription is
Cman7 Says:
THis is really good. I love it! *fav*
VCBloodShine Says:
But if you want honesty,
Your writing could really use a little extra help ;/
Nice work tho.
rednek Says:
Yay, glad to see it out ^^
The wolves are entirely black although they're standing in fully colored background during the bright day... I saw it before in other comics and yeah, I know, it's there becouse I'm not supposed to see their faces/details about them blah blah... But it's still somehow weird 
So, I am not telling it's wrong or something, but I personally wouldn't do that. Ofc, it's up to you to decide ^^
Here's a little something I wrote...
About the first picture, I love that black wolf, although I am not sure what is it standing on? Looks like it's flying above ground, lol.
Or is it just me?
I am unsure about the Background in the second picture, that hill specifically. Just one gray-colored gradient, but entirely black wolves on it? It looks somehow unnatural :\ I would:
a)Paint the whole hill black
b)Paint the wolves on it grey
c)Paint it all in colors.
I would also draw some grass in there, not just one line to define what is ground and what is not.
I am not sure what to say about the last picture
That's as most crit as I can give, I'll fav. it now, just to help you get it on front page.
weisse edelweiss Says:
This is looking great so far! I'm really excited to see the rest of the story!
Amz Says:
Interesting story, although the dialogue is...well, pretty lame.
"The sisters disliked each other."
That could be replaced with something around the lines of "The hatred between both the sisters resisted peace."
But I think you're doing great so far! Nice backgrounds, good wolf anatomy...keep it up~
JelmerBV Says:
Looks interesting
I'll be waiting for new pages ^^
Sanifa Says:
wow *w* you make a comic? i too but im working..:) nice story and i'll be waitung for the neyt pages :)
Kiwi Tang Says:
Can't wait to see more.
CarlaC Says:
Oh! The story sound very interesting, and I already like the story from the prologue
English is not my mother tongue.
Can't wait to see the next pages!
The artworks also looks very good, especially the first panel and the background from the last panel.
About the text, I can't really help you with that
But... in conclusion. Yes! I like it very much and I think it's a good comic, although I only saw one page. But I know it would be awesome.
Continue with the great work