So I was playing around using Q-tips to brush/smudge around the graphite & I did this. I was pretty happy with it, and I figured it was something I needed to post since I seem to neglect the backside in most of my work
it's pretty good. the shading is nice and the pose is good. but there are a couple awkward spots. for one, the hand is weird. the pointer finger looks lumpy, and too short. also, the pinky looks too long. also, her spine is a bit too far to the right. given her pose, and the fact that a bit of her right side is showing, the spine should be more to the left, and the left shoulder blade should be foreshortened accordingly. overall, though, good job. i know these things weren't really your focus, but it doesn't hurt to work on everything at once.
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nimtzie Says:
it's pretty good. the shading is nice and the pose is good. but there are a couple awkward spots. for one, the hand is weird. the pointer finger looks lumpy, and too short. also, the pinky looks too long. also, her spine is a bit too far to the right. given her pose, and the fact that a bit of her right side is showing, the spine should be more to the left, and the left shoulder blade should be foreshortened accordingly. overall, though, good job. i know these things weren't really your focus, but it doesn't hurt to work on everything at once.