this was a commission I did recently for my aunt as a gift to her daughter/my cousin. I'm fairly happy with the results, and the colour versions were for kicks/options. Thought I'd share
Scrolling back and forth, I must say I'm really fond of the pinkest version to the left, though they all have a certain appeal. I think this is a progressive image for you, with a simple but effective composition... it definitely doesn't look overworked, and all the elements are appopriate. I like the designs on her corset, and the lighting looks good. I also want to tangle myself in those spider webs for some reason...
I could potentially have critiques, but I don't make a habit of critiquing commission/gift work. I just think it's a little rude, myself.
I prefer the right-most, personally, but they're all really good. I would say that while her left arm may seem slightly out-of-proportion, it's actually in better proportion than my real right arm. And angling the eyes to where her hand would be may make her look like she's adjusting something.
A little more useful perhaps than 'OMGLOL IT'S KYOOT'
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skinnyvee Says:
Scrolling back and forth, I must say I'm really fond of the pinkest version to the left, though they all have a certain appeal. I think this is a progressive image for you, with a simple but effective composition... it definitely doesn't look overworked, and all the elements are appopriate. I like the designs on her corset, and the lighting looks good. I also want to tangle myself in those spider webs for some reason...
I could potentially have critiques, but I don't make a habit of critiquing commission/gift work. I just think it's a little rude, myself.
grievuspwn4g3 Says:
I prefer the right-most, personally, but they're all really good. I would say that while her left arm may seem slightly out-of-proportion, it's actually in better proportion than my real right arm. And angling the eyes to where her hand would be may make her look like she's adjusting something.
A little more useful perhaps than 'OMGLOL IT'S KYOOT'