My Dead Heart

by VampireXghost

in Completed Works

My Dead Heart

i hurt the one thing close to my heart
i never thought the time would come when we were apart
i'm sorry i hurt you when i did
and now i think i shouldn't live
if you don't love me anymore
i understand that there's the door
i will leave if you want
i will never come back
i lost my one love
and now i'm dead

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Dec 26th 2008
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dark and horror depressed sad
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just felt depressed at the time ....

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xVampyRxPunkx Says:

...

*hug*

Sam Lam Says:

Great phrases, very nice mood, the language is not overdone or overkilled.

Keep it up, and you got yourself a job downtown next to the Fire department.

Great work, love it.