Tortoise vs Hare Mini-Story

Now that my first Semester has drawn to a close,
I can upload some older work.

One of our funnest projects in class was to either make your own short story or choose an existing one.
Me with my constant mental blocks and wariness of showing my original stories in the open, chose the classic 'Tortoise and the Hare' tale.
Excuse the crappy upload quality...I don't have a scanner big enough for most the stuff I've been posting.

I can point out every blatant flaw in this, but it was great practice. Gave me some great ideas and insight over how to improve.
I may apply this later to a self made comic, who knows?
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Naw, I'm a lazy bastard.
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Tortoise and the Hare originally created by Aesop
All Work is (c) Cole 'Vice' H.