Okay, The reason why the face looks a little scary is that her mouth appears a bit gormless, if you give her more of a smile, as in, continue some lines to make more of a ":3" face. I can see that she's trying to smile but at the moment it's coming out as a light smirk. Also, faces are generally scary when looking straight towards the camera so if you could slightly re-position the eye, she might appear less scary. One other note, if it's possible, try to use a different shade of blue on her eye, maybe a lighter and more muted tone. Experiment with eyelash lengths too, see what looks to you, the best. I've noticed the tear duct on the eye too, that's something I very rarely see on art, so great job on including that.
I have to compliment you on the fur too, it looks very nice, especially the fur on the head. I'm not too keen on her fingers being the same length though.
If you think about gravity, do you think that her flared top would stick out at the sides? Try and incorporate some realistic folds to her sleeves. Look for some examples of tops on Google images to give you a better understanding. I'm guessing that the top is made from velvet and as someone else stated, it does at parts seem like it's also made from fur. Experiment with some other materials and
Her left ear is noticeably bigger than her right ear. I myself prefer the size of her right ear, but as long as they're both consistent, it's up to you.
Whiskers seem a little light and creased, it kinda looks like she doesn't take care of them enough. =(
The body itself seems fairly okay, although I think some slightly smaller boobs would be nice as the current ones seem too high up, cutting too far into her shoulders.
The arms are way too wide in proportion to the rest of her body, depending on what drawing application you are using, try adding a layer and roughly sketching out an outline of her arms, then tightly wrap the top around her. Arms could also do with being just a tad longer. Use yourself as a model and see where your own arms reach to and then mimic that in the drawing. In fact, if you can use your own body as more of a reference, you may get a better result.
I hope this helps somewhat.
Good luck on future drawings.
Comments
jrOc Says:
I can see why
Shoyurwing22 Says:
Eh, the body could use a bit more work; but the fur looks .. good for being realistic, I suppose. Better fur then I could do.
BoredArtist Says:
Lol fluffy
must 
AngusNitro41 Says:
she is scary D:. i don't know how to do fur ><. also what's the green stuff on her T-shirt?
tjtum15 Says:
thats awsome I bet the fur was hard to do.
Junior Shadow Says:
ZOMG Cutenees
Sheezy 93 Says:
aww her fur look like fizzy fur cat
D it so cute she look more likely a cute baby cat
x3sweetnitemares Says:
kinda creepy in the face =X
other then that its good\
looks like big
NintendoDS Says:
the realism makes her look extra fuzzy
M One Says:
Okay, The reason why the face looks a little scary is that her mouth appears a bit gormless, if you give her more of a smile, as in, continue some lines to make more of a ":3" face. I can see that she's trying to smile but at the moment it's coming out as a light smirk. Also, faces are generally scary when looking straight towards the camera so if you could slightly re-position the eye, she might appear less scary. One other note, if it's possible, try to use a different shade of blue on her eye, maybe a lighter and more muted tone. Experiment with eyelash lengths too, see what looks to you, the best. I've noticed the tear duct on the eye too, that's something I very rarely see on art, so great job on including that.
I have to compliment you on the fur too, it looks very nice, especially the fur on the head. I'm not too keen on her fingers being the same length though.
If you think about gravity, do you think that her flared top would stick out at the sides? Try and incorporate some realistic folds to her sleeves. Look for some examples of tops on Google images to give you a better understanding. I'm guessing that the top is made from velvet and as someone else stated, it does at parts seem like it's also made from fur. Experiment with some other materials and
Her left ear is noticeably bigger than her right ear. I myself prefer the size of her right ear, but as long as they're both consistent, it's up to you.
Whiskers seem a little light and creased, it kinda looks like she doesn't take care of them enough. =(
The body itself seems fairly okay, although I think some slightly smaller boobs would be nice as the current ones seem too high up, cutting too far into her shoulders.
The arms are way too wide in proportion to the rest of her body, depending on what drawing application you are using, try adding a layer and roughly sketching out an outline of her arms, then tightly wrap the top around her. Arms could also do with being just a tad longer. Use yourself as a model and see where your own arms reach to and then mimic that in the drawing. In fact, if you can use your own body as more of a reference, you may get a better result.
I hope this helps somewhat.
Good luck on future drawings.
- Matt