Here I sit and wonder

by Mile

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Here I sit and wonder

Instead of talking, I wait to be talked to.
Instead of calling, I wait to be called to.

Instead of commenting, I wait to be commented.
Instead of talking in MSN, I wait for someone to start a conversation.

Instead of caring, I wait to cared of.
Instead of loving, I wait to be loved.
> 'The Christmas Calendar: 14th ' by Mile

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Dec 14th 2008
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Something that I realised when clicking "refresh" in SA.

It's always hard to realise some personal flaw >_> And even harder to notice you don't want to change it.

(c) Mile

This is really neutral, I'm neither sad nor happy here.

Oh and ABOUT THE PREVIEW:
It's a work I did at Arts... I was supposed to submit it but never did. Should I do so?

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BlueEyes Says:

Ooh.. somehow I like this little thought. :3
The preview looks interesting. I wanna see it. ^^