All my tears (sad improv, very short)

by Alex LOL Stoica

in Completed Works

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Dec 14th 2008
Tags:
ambient cerebral dj instrumental miscellaneous
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63
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6
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Ehhh, I'm not really sure what got into me, but I wanted to see if I could actually pull something like this off.
Yes , I know it's incredibly short, but i couldn't find anywhere else to go with it!
Yes, it is pure Improv, but i did work on the Quantizing of each note a little so it would fit correctly, seeing as my Keyboard skills aren't magnificent.

Comments

Bozo Says:


Now that sums up the saying, short but sweet!. And you are only 14? Well done, also thanks for checking out my song(s). à bientôt, Rob.

SallyMusic Says:

I think this would work as an introduction, it feels like it then wants to go into a faster paced piece, just a thought!

DaVinci Jr Says:

You need a singer and good lyrics and you're the next timbaland, or will.i.am:))

Shodarkhorn Says:

Not to bad but again that repetitiveness is too apparent in the track...you need to mix things up more, don't rely so heavily on one instrument to bring all the pieces together...this was a nice attempt at something new but the repetitivness holds the track back from being stellar.

work on mixing up your instruments more and less on relying on single instruments to hold a score together, add more variety to the scores. Still this was a good attempt at something new as you usually do but in the end you need to work more on your pieces and focus on completing a more polished piece.


I give this track 2 stars out of 5

Jaxxy Says:

Good beat. Kind Gothic sounding which is different from your usual stuff. :) It's fun the change it up though.

Kisume Says:

This is a cool improv. Simple, but powerful