Her proportions are a bit off-
her neck should be wider, her shoulders should be broader.
Her arm looks a little detached, it should flow into the body more.
Legs are way too long- though it's hard to notice because of the clothing.
I like the pose though, and the shading on the tummy.
The boobs look very squishy too.
mmmm.
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ironsenshi Says:
Her proportions are a bit off-
her neck should be wider, her shoulders should be broader.
Her arm looks a little detached, it should flow into the body more.
Legs are way too long- though it's hard to notice because of the clothing.
I like the pose though, and the shading on the tummy.
The boobs look very squishy too.
mmmm.
CarlaC Says:
Aww.. where's the blouse!? The blouse pattern was pwetty
But the artwork looks really nice!
Awesome colouring at the body skin