Band Commission

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Dec 5th 2008
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band commission expressive human security shadows within
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This is a commission for my friends band, criticism would be appreciated.
http://www.myspace.com/securitywithinshadows

Comments

McBob Says:

Hmmm.

The placement of the singer's arm joints makes his wrists too long and upper parts of the arms too short.
The bassist's left wrist is longer than his right wrist, and vice-versa for the upper part of his arms.
Also, the spacing of the guitar frets is supposed to decrease from the top of the neck to the bottom; you have it reversed in the drawing.

Maybe I'm looking too much into this.

Frario Says:

It turned out better than the WIP you showed :] nice job!
For the c+c: the singers arms bends too early. and sometimes the limbs aren't the same thickness.
But in overal it's really great :]

king david Says:

yeah dude u just need to get aquintened with your anatomy and proportions a little better. decent drawing tho

ILK Says:

There needs to be a kick pedal where the bass drum is, otherwise there is no purpose in having the bass drum. I'd also throw in a high hat and ride cymbal..