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SheezyArt's Kingdom Hearts
It's amazing who and what you can meet within a few short hours.My name is Mika, and this is my story of how I saved a universe, and its inhabitens. This wasn't done alone, but i'll explain that later.
It started when I first woke up. When I say woke up, I mean jumped off the couch I was lying on, only to find Someone staring at me."Good, you're awake." the man said. "Who are you, more importently, where am I?!" The man looked around Questionably, then looked at me and said, "My name is Otakun, and as for where you are, your in my shop." Just then, another voice spoke. "He means disregarding your shop, you twit." He adressed himself as SergeP, A rather brutish looking fellow, but his eyes concealed what seemes to be a softer side. I imagined that, until he spoke again. "Just what are you doing here? I thought the Admin. shut down the new arival gate after the infection of spammers." I said to him, "I don't kno how I got here, And as for... Wait, what? Spammers?" Otakun then spoke up, "You mean you don't know? I though the Chosen were supposed to know about the infection." I then added, "I can assure you I don't know what your talking about." SergeP stood up and said, "That sythe you weild, it is the instrumen in wich legends spoke of." At this point, I was thrown for a loop. I had no idea I went anywhere, I didn't know what they were talking about when they mentioned a sythe, And thats when I noticed the damn thing in My Hand. "What is this i'm holding?" I asked. SergeP and Otakun then explained to me that apparently I was broght to a place called THE SHEEZYART HUB, and The sythe I was holding was used to ward off evil spammers. So, there was my next question, "What's a spammer?" Just then, someone came in through the shop doors. "Spammers are cruel, sick twisted beings that destroy worlds. They kill innocent people for seemingly no reason. They must be eliminated." I can honestly say that he answered my question pretty clearly. "Who are YOU?" I asked the robed stranger. He answered, "My name is HellBoy002, and those monsters killed my family. I WANT REVENGE!" His anger was the first thing I've noticed, and he seemed to know just who he was talking to. "Just what makes you certain I can do anything about that Pal?" I stated. "Because I saw something fall from the sky and land at this exact spot, and your carrying a Big Ass sythe, I only assumed." Well, I'm not exactly the type of guy to turn down an offer, if you call what he said an offer. "Okay, i'm in, but before I go, how come noone bothered to learn my name?" Otakun spoke up, stating " OH, right, what is it?" "It's Mika, and don't worry. I'll take care of these spammers". Me and Hellboy headed out into the Citadel.
This place was enourmous, it was bigger than anyhing I've ever seen. "Like it? 'cause this is where we will be staying for a while." said Hellboy. "This place is nice, but where do we start lookin' for any of those spammers?" I said. HellBoy stood and thought for a wile, until we heard someone shouting. "FIRE!", is what me and HellBoy heard. We quickly ran to see what had happened, only to find what looked like a human sized animal in a kimono. I quickly asked to the thing, "What happpend here, and what's this creature?" I automaticly found out that it was a She, and SHE got mad. "CREATURE?! You wanna say that to my face again, ya little..." She stoped to look at me and HellBoy. "Mika, you might want to apologise. Furries don't like it when they're reffered to as creatures." I took up on HellBoy's advice, and got down on my knees and beged for forgiveness. She looked at me questionabl and said, "I was only kidding, you can get up. By the way, my name is Candybubbles. Glad to meet you" Me and Hellboy gave our introductions. She stated right away, "Oh, you guys are on a quest too?" We shook our heads.
Too Be cont.
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Comments
HellBoy002 Says:
...dude....friggin awsome...
zerospace Says:
I'm really not trying to be rude, but there are some serious spelling and grammatical errors.
Also, the second paragraph is confusing. It's all one paragraph, and things become jumbled together. Actually, I can see a slight break halfway through, so you might want to push that down another line... Still, I think more breaks would work out well there.
candybubbles Says:
Nice way to introduce the three of us all in the beginning!
Rennifer Says:
So you know Otakun personally then?