You

frayed at the edges
and torn at the heart
there were no more ways
I could fall apart

I was this broken
when you came along
and your gentle touch
taught me to be strong

now I have a hand
to hold in the dark
in silence I find
a magical spark

someday I'll show you
just how much I care
but for now I'll love
these moments we share
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Nov 15th 2008
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happy philosophical romance you youth
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probably my favorite poem that i've written so far

Comments

WolfRosell Says:

wow. awesome. i love it it says a lot in very few words. nicely done.

MagnusXcaboose Says:

This is beautiful, very good job.

AuroranWolf Says:

Ah so sweet. -^^- Could this poem be about Olivia by chance? Tehehehe...

Opheliac Says:

aw....I really like this one...if makes me feel warm inside :3

Rieal Dragonsbane Says:

Cute!