Breath Test 2

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Nov 3rd 2008

Tags:: experimental suspense
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Comments:: 35
Score:: 40
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Remember the first one? yeah, I remember it... the old character have a lot of improvitation through the time

New things: well, nearly everything
-New character
-better background
-good ilumination
-fixed secondary facial animation (more solid, is preparing for battle, no?) and added others (IÂ´m not sure why I make move the ears, maybe to broke a bit that stance pose :/)
-and added Sound! sadly the PC microphones are evil and make hiss and noise in the breath ):C lucky Adobe Audition is good C:

I try to make the bucle with the sound included, but by some reason Macromedia Flash donÂ´t do correctly. Flash Animatiors, if you want you can say me how to fix that :]

Well, is great at all, a good improve than the first one

EDIT: Front Page in second place... way cool man! 8D (Link]

Comments

Hideto Love Says:

it's a little slow, but i like it a lot!

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oneshot Says:

Overall this is really good though just like everything else in life improvements can be made. really good though. lol ears twitch.

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Robber Baron Says:

Stylistically, the chunky hair is really irritating. I suppose I've been spoiled by other animation, but it's also that the technology has progressed so much that it's expected for the hair to have strands. The same goes for the clothes, which seem too close to the body and pretty much painted on. It has a '90s video game feel to it, which isn't a good thing, really. The pattern for the pants looks really fake. I know that it's supposed to be denim, but it doesn't look like denim. I suppose it is too uniform. The rolling of the shoulders is too forced looking - as if he were doing exercises. Finally, the ear twitches are too slow and appear to be voluntary movements. Now, don't get me wrong - you did a good job.

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