Alright, first of all I would like to ask everyone what do you see wrong with the timing? I'm still not too sure on when to make something two or single frames so I've been messing around with this trying to get the timing right but nothing seems to look totally natural and this was the closest I could get to the actual speed. Also I'm going to add more hang time later, it just doesn't stay up in the air long enough
Otherwise I think this came out pretty descent, just a few smudges here and there (I wore my eraser down to the numb lol), it's just the speed and timing I really need to focus on
Anyways my "refined" version to this, and by refined I just mean outlined lol
http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1905306/
I won't be submitting anymore small animations for awhile since all the samples I have submitted were just pieces of the final project, so rest a sure that I'll be working day and night refining and finishing the whole short lol
Enjoy!
Comments
symbiote Says:
wow kool nice and smooth
ClampX Says:
Very smooth. I don't see anything wrong with the timing. Maybe you should have the falling rate faster, that's the only suggestion I have at the moment. Other than that, good animation. :)
Bobfleadip Says:
Scratch the time remark I made in the description, I uploaded a different file from what I was thinking of when I was writing it, this one is purposely slow so you guys can see all the detail cause the quicktime res is a peice of shit so I had to blow it up
pikablu5 Says:
nice job
but you do realize its "decent" not "descent"
Arturo Says:
nice nice, looks great but the bounce could be a bit stronger, like her arms should go all the way down to make it look it had a stronger impact
Min27 Says:
Is it supposed to be in low gravity? Just wondering.
captainshoujo Says:
I agree with min, timing and stuff is pefect, it's just a bit dragged out, stuff falls at 7.3 m/s
RIPPL3R Says:
I see no trampoline which can only mean she has a bouncy butt. Or springs in her pants.
C: All the practice has paid off !
Skater007 Says:
WoW!!!
Awesome!
Smooth and cool, I like it!
Jaxxy Says:
Her hair moves like a tail...it's the only part that bothers me. The animation itself is very well done though. Great job. :) Good control and show of force, gravity, and timing. That is some difficult shit to do. It's a lot harder than most people think. o-O