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the day before the day
i was happy intune enlightened and joyfull for it is the day before the day.
i walked blissfully threw and threw only thinking of you . thinking when and how i would convey the way i felt on the day on that day before the day.
i had my plan i had it set until your text caused me a fret and now the day before the day has thrown me to dismay
you call me your friend until the end and every time inside i cry wither and die while my face is set to its usual smile on that day before the day.
on the day before the day you made me feel this way
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Moo Sensei Says:
Aww I like this, but you should work on punctuation, grammar, and spelling. It distracts from your piece and makes some of your work unclear. Other than that though this is really nice. =]