Primarily looking for feedback on this one. I haven't attempted something this ambitious in some time. I was alerted to a Harvest Moon fan art contest hosted by Natsume, and when my wife saw the prize pack I was ordered to engage. This is what my stuff looks like before I do the final linework, so please ignore the nude figures with invisible clothes [
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We have here Karen and Jack from the Mineral Town series. First problem I had was the characters themselves. Since all the Harvest Moon characters are portrayed in a chibi-fied style, making them look more realistic was something of a chore. Jack's hat is supposed to be backwards, but it looked really weird, and I know a beagle shouldn't be able to fit in a bag like that but damn if he isn't a cute little pisher.
Again, looking for critique or errors before I finish lining it in. Thanks for looking.
Comments
Akean Says:
really nice first sketch, the puppy is really cut, is he holding something on his shoulder? the woman's legs end weird at the edge of the paper.