I haven't submitted anything in a while... This is a fresh piece, I think. I'm trying to get used to a different rhyming style, because all my poetry is so damn similar, but I don't think I've quite accomplished it yet...
Wrote this in English class while studying a sonnet on luv.
DON'T JUDGE ME, BBS. I KNOW NOT WHAT I DO.
You should see the sex poem I have. A-hah. A-hah.
Yikes, I really need to get back to writing...poetry is going wonky ways, my dear friends.
Comments
pur plec loud Says:
Well I like it, it's very interesting and more towards the abstracty kind of vein I enjoy :3
kind of made me thing e. e. cummings
monicachaloupka Says:
It's nice to get a break from poems that don't ryhme and I love this. =]