Me and my bro

by Renagadez

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< 'Pokemon myth of missingno' by Renagadez

Me and my bro

me and my bro walking along
I look up to him all the time
I think he so big and strong
When i need help hes always besides me
Even in my deepest darkest pains
He would be there...
But when we grow
I wonder if he would care
About his little bro...
> 'Ling ling' by Renagadez

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Jan 4th 2005
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A poem I made,its about being brothers and loosing that brotherly love.I know you dont have to tell me i suck a poems...well tell me what you think.

Edit:I got the image of an inuyasha doujinshi

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Spring the Rabbit Says:

What a nice poem! A good change from all that moon and june bull shit I've seen. That's good.

STSC Says:

YOU 0wn!

Riku Ikaruga Says:

Awwwwrz!! *huggles him* I shall be your big brudder! *snug snug snug*


lovely poem! ^-^ it's sweet..I know what that feels like, with my big sister <_< and I like the picture O_o

crystalmew Says:

Naww...thats so sweet. Too bad my lil' brojahs arn't like that...they loathe each other. o_o; *blinks*

...Sesshomaru-sama!

Psi43 Says:

Inuyasha is kool...

but his big bro (dunno how to write the name... but I can speak it)

ownz him =D

yamato241 Says:

Awe!