No One Knows the Stars are Dying.
I've noticed as I lie in bed, awake,
And look beyond the glass for old-time's sake,
My eyes focus on the nighttime sky
To count the falling stars as they shoot by.
Their little cries all reach my ears--
No one knows they're dying, here...
And every night I watch and cry
As more and more of those dying stars pass by.
They fall to the ground like silent rain--
I retrieve them and try to heal their pain--
They tell me the world is different from before,
And they refuse to shine for us anymore.
--no one knows the stars are dying,
No one knows, and no one's trying;
No one knows they've lost their worth
As one by one they fall to Earth.
We are so caught up in our own lives
That we hardly see beyond our eyes:
The stars all out, but we don't hear,
And they continue dying year after year.
Though these stars have watched their time unfurl,
We find we're still looking for our place in the world.
And even as they fall, we humans will rise...
Despite the heaven's unyielding sighs.
And no one knows the stars are dying,
No one knows that it's them crying,
That you no longer hear their mirth
As one by one they fall to Earth.
So next time you see a falling star,
Thank the world for who you are;
And the next time you wish on a star at night
Pray it stays there with all your might--
--Wish for a reason to smile when you look outside,
Or for something to follow when you can't decide;
Wish for a motive to keep on trying...
...because no one knows the stars are dying.
Comments
hyperactiveice Says:
Oh, so lovely.
(sounds pretty mean of them)
Hitaru Higakura Says:
DLshadjkgh.
Your parents are so strict. D8
BUT LOL I REMEMBER THIS. I TOTALLY REMEMBER THIS.
Purple Cloud Says:
I remember thisssssssss



Also it's been frontpaged :3
moodylynn Says:
I remember this as well. I loved it then and I love it still. Glad to see it back~
MithClearwell Says:
Aww... ^^ Such a sad and sweet poem. I wonder why you had to remove your work...? Well, it's not really my matter to pry into. I love this piece here, so I am going to favorite it. I rarely ever read poetry, because mostly I see things about slitting wrists and dying after a petty breakup with Mr. or Ms. Wonderful, and some of it is just so badly written that it gags me. I like your poem, though; it allows itself to make a few rhymes that aren't precise, and it doesn't revel in its own "cleverness" (seriously, some people think they are soooo clever if they can push out an exact rhyme, but what they don't know is that it makes no freaking sense!). Seems like a very emotional piece of writing and I love the message.
I'm going to go look for stars now. D: Good job!
Grape juice Says:
T^T I LOVED THIS SO MUCH. I totally remember this and I'm glad it's on the front page again.
Inyro Says:
I normally don't read much poetry online, because everyone seems to be writing a perverse style of "free-verse" and I can't be bothered to suffer through it.
But I liked this poem, for the most part. Other than a few runs on the rhythm, it's well put together. I'll admit I only read about seven of the stanzas... I can't sit still as much as I'd like. Believe me, I'll finish it...
Again, it's nice to see a refreshing example of traditional, rhymed poetry nowadays. I'd almost thought it was gone for good. =)
oneshot Says:
This is really good but why did your parents make you delte your art?
settithir Says:
congratulations on the first front paged poem in a long time.
We are so caught up in our own lives
That we hardly see beyond our eyes:
The stars call out, but we don't hear,
And they continue dying year after year.
is my favorite stanza. I also liked how the 3rd and 5th stanzas were the same chorus-like rhythm.
Furcifer07 Says:
This is so beautiful and i love how you so effortlessly transition into each rhyme. Go poetry! We need more great poetry like this in the world.