i have constructive criticism, so don't take this the wrong way.
though the outifit is lovely, and very pinup-esque, the proportion is wrong.
most pinups are very volumtious, while she is not. i suggest studying a pinup in her pose and drawing that. also, don't add the clothing until you have drawn the body. that way the bodies will look much better. i also suggest working on perspective so the legs and body parts look more realistic.
i hope that you will take my criticism and apply it to your art. i believe you can be fantastic, if you get more practice in.
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Zombis UNIVERSE Says:
i have constructive criticism, so don't take this the wrong way.
though the outifit is lovely, and very pinup-esque, the proportion is wrong.
most pinups are very volumtious, while she is not. i suggest studying a pinup in her pose and drawing that. also, don't add the clothing until you have drawn the body. that way the bodies will look much better. i also suggest working on perspective so the legs and body parts look more realistic.
i hope that you will take my criticism and apply it to your art. i believe you can be fantastic, if you get more practice in.