*EDITS*
- this is mashiro from Bakuman ! if you haven't read it yet, please do ~ (it's by the same guy who drew death note and hikari no go; except he's working solo this time !)
-arm & hand are weird
there is failed perspective. not even a stylistic approach can save it. There's a problem right at the area the arm bends. Plus the wrist looks like it was chopped and place at a weird angle. basically in order to achieve that position the arm would have to be wobbly. The knuckles are a bit off too. Anyone who says other wise is not an artist.
still 7 points for effort.
You can always go back, I suggest using a skeleton and taking a picture of someone with an arm in that position.
Definitely Bakuman, or at least some reference from it.
Not bad though, it doesn't seem to be perfect. I'm not quite certain as to what it is, but the arm is a little weird.
Try drawing from life for a bit, it'll help out with you perspective. It doesn't matter what angle of pose they're in, it'll help. Learning from life is a key element to drawing, after all: "You've got to learn the rules, before you learn to break them."
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Comments
Dowser Says:
I think it's really good o.o
Starsity Says:
If it makes you feel better, you're better at perspective than me. ^^'
Rainagi Says:
How is it fail at perspective?! o.0 It is better than anything I could wish to even draw. D: I am jelous.
Eddosan Says:
I think that even if (IF!) it lacks real perspective, the way it's drawn gives it such an amazing stylistic approach.
It's more than great as it is.
RockLeesBaby Says:
I think the perspective is very good. The whole pic looks great ^^
LEMONcube Says:
i feel that the perspective is quite strong :<
XSilverMoonlightX Says:
the perspective is epic! Silly u crazy!
D: its amazing...lol
mktranma Says:
there is failed perspective. not even a stylistic approach can save it. There's a problem right at the area the arm bends. Plus the wrist looks like it was chopped and place at a weird angle. basically in order to achieve that position the arm would have to be wobbly. The knuckles are a bit off too. Anyone who says other wise is not an artist.
still 7 points for effort.
You can always go back, I suggest using a skeleton and taking a picture of someone with an arm in that position.
giascle Says:
Bakuman?
redberet Says:
Definitely Bakuman, or at least some reference from it.
Not bad though, it doesn't seem to be perfect. I'm not quite certain as to what it is, but the arm is a little weird.
Try drawing from life for a bit, it'll help out with you perspective. It doesn't matter what angle of pose they're in, it'll help. Learning from life is a key element to drawing, after all: "You've got to learn the rules, before you learn to break them."
Good luck