Hey, look, another poem!

by Satchan

in Completed Works

Hey, look, another poem!

Haine
is tough,
used to fight for what she believed in—everything—but she doesn't believe in anything anymore.

Rafe
is maddening,
the sort of man fathers warn their daughters about, but a good heart for all that, surprisingly loyal.

Tori
is brave,
keeping a sort of honor that most people only read about; it's easy, she just doesn't let herself feel.

Mische
is calm,
the kind of quiet that comes from not needing to raise your voice to be heard; all he wants is her.

Alakina
is cold,
no one believes she cares about anyone but herself; they're only half wrong, there are two others.

Rothian
is cheerful,
it's hard to imagine him as anything else, but he hides behind a smile and lighthearted words.

Rhys
is kind,
that is something no one can fake, the desire to help anyone and everyone find their happiness.

Jasper
is shy,
can't even look her in the eye; he wants to keep her safe but she's been protecting him all along.

Archer
is a cipher,
binding them all together; she's a chameleon without a voice of her own, hiding in plain sight…
> Meme!

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Sep 26th 2008
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characters experimental experiments free verse human nature narrative philosophical poetry random romance society
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So my creative writing class has actually gotten me to semi-like writing poetry. I tried this as an experiment to see if I could get a description of some of my characters' personalities to fit on one line each. It was hard, but I managed it. Yay! Sheezy kind of messes with the formatting, but oh well, you get the point...

Characters are from Finding Archer Cohen, (c) me!

Preview pic done by Tigerbomberx of DeviantArt.

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pur plec loud Says:

oooh interesting
:3 i wish i knew these characters better

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Lilac Wood Says:

That's all fun, and now I want to try it with some of my characters. Maybe for my NaNoWriMo cast :) I love the adjective for each character followed by a stronger image to really show that adjective in action.

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