A Dramatic Moment

by Kessie

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< 'Alice the Cat Sketchies' by Kessie

A Dramatic Moment

But then, Amanda just broke down crying. She dropped to her knees, covering her face. Sonic looked at her in pity, and walked over to her. "Amanda..." he said softly, helping her up. "Sonic... I-I just can't take this!" Her voice broke, and she collapsed in his arms, sobbing. Sonic hugged her sympathetically, but then gently pushed her back on her feet. She sniffed and looked down, her face apparently red. Then, Sonic cupped her head in his hands, and softly lifted it up. Some more tears streamed down her face. Hey, Hey! There’s no need to cry.” He murmured softly. She sniffed again, and replied, “R-Really?” Her sky blue eyes sparkled with tears. “Yeah.” He said. Sonic tilted his head, and closed his emerald green eyes as he edged closer. Amanda closed her eyes and moved closer as well. Then suddenly, their lips smashed together in an earth-crumbling kiss. Amanda shuddered as she felt the electric flow rapidly through her veins as her heart pounded wildly in her chest. However, this only made Sonic pull her closer, and make the kiss more passionate. Amanda was actually in love, and this was by far the best moment of her life. When they had stopped, it seemed the world came back into motion. Things exploded, fire burned. The battle became more intense. But ignoring all this, Sonic looked at Amanda again. “Hey-“ He touched her shoulder, and she spun around, facing him. “Want another one?” He gave her a wry smile, and she returned the look.

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Sep 26th 2008
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This is an excerpt from a story I'm writing. I figured I'd go with the most dramatic moment to pull you in. >

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