experimental angst

by Afro Bear

in Completed Works

experimental angst

So you want to be with me, well, you’ve said that before
And you’re lucky I didn’t just call you a whore

Especially after what you’ve done
You treated me like I was the one

And then tossed me aside
and I took it in stride

and here you are today,
asking me to take you away

well, fuck it
for all I care you can get a horse and suck it

you think I want to be with you? We tried that
it got us where were at

you dropped me after he came back
and left me feeling like I got a smack

on the face
well screw that, I’m done with this race

you can say you win,
you can say all you want about what I’m doing is a sin

but let me say this: lying, cheating, and lying some more
and with that, I close this door
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Mature Sep 25th 2008
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eh, I just sat down and wrote it. tell me what you think. oh, and no, it isnt about anyone here if anyone is thinking that

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Kuceman Says:

Great job once again Dana ^^!