Good bye

I left a note under your pillow,
it says everything
I couldn't tell you.
From hello, to good bye

They warned us from the beginning,
they were right from the very start.

I hated you and loved you,
you weren't surprised.
I loved you so dearly.

You'll never read the note...

Hello... good bye

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Sep 25th 2008
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angst bye dark and horror experimental note
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Interpretation please?
Also... I don't like this poem very much, but it seems that I'm slowely recovering my inspiration.

P.S.And... I need someone to correct my errors in the next piece I wrote.

Comments

Jasuperu Says:

It's certainly a nice poem. And I volunteer for correction!

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HakuCordero Says:

I can't really find much to interpret; it seems to be pretty straight-forward...
You are right, though; slowly, but surely, you're getting back into the rhythm of things

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monicachaloupka Says:

Ummm is my computer being really stupid or is the only thing that is there is 'goodbye' ?

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PSangel Says:

It's beautiful Ann, it's not really the type of writing style i assosiate you with though. I'm not saying that it's anything wrong with it because it's not.
Very straight forward and honest but a bit sad...I like it.:)

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Dark Larva Says:

A very nice piece, and for reasons it hits me much like the truth of everything when trying to live in the comforts of a dream. Miss talking to you BTW ::Hugs::

HakuCordero Says:

Yeah, you are
So... where'd you hide the body? O.o