Let Me Go

by Fanime234

in Completed Works

< 'Oriental Waitress' by Fanime234

Let Me Go

It hurts deep inside,

Where you still reside.

Its been awhile,

Since my last smile.

It’s been more than a year.....

How can you still be here?

You are more than I can take.

Please, just give me a small break!

My life is a mess,

Because of your caress.....

Your gentle kiss.....

Your sweetened lies.....

Your sparkling eyes.....

Your familiar figure....

They’re all just a trigger,

For more pain than I can bear...

And I know, you’ll never care....

Not that you did before.....



Even so, if you’d come back...

I could never show you the door...

Description

Sep 19th 2008
Tags:
narrative poem
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I know this poem isn't that great, but I hope you like it :]

Comments

KyoKuddler Says:

I loved it! The last part was a little bit unclear, but it was really awesome~

Neji Luver101 Says:

I really, really, really like this :3 Great job

Aang7Mali Says:

I like it
it is short and sweet but it says a lot

WhatLoveDid Says:

Lovely work.
I think I might have to watch you. (: