So I did these for creative writing class. We were supposed to pick an object off the table and write two poems related to it: one that was vague, and one that was more precise. I picked a fishing lure.
They aren't much good cause I suck at poetry, but I haven't submitted anything in awhile, so I figured I might as well.
Comments
pur plec loud Says:
I loooooooooove the first one


...the second one is sad D:
Become So Numb Says:
I like them, they're really good
They're not bad. I can't get anything like that...
Lilac Wood Says:
In the first, I like the repetition of seaweed. It made me sort of feel a passing of time, the motion of sending out the line and wheeling it in over and over for just seaweed. And a shoe. I agree that the second is sad, and yet it also has a sort of humor to it.