Cheated

by Giil

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Cheated

I love you she says

Love you too he replies

She's happy as she hangs up

And looks at the skies

He swaps back the calls

And says it again

I'll love you forever

Through thick and through thin

A month and a half

And she still has no clue

They talk every night

And her love is so true

It takes three long months

For her to figure it out

He just sits there idly

Letting her scream, rant, and shout

While she cries all alone

Her life hanging on a thread

He's out on the town

Not a care in his head

He has a new girl

When he shows up at school

That's it she can't take it

And takes herself out of a world that's so cruel.
> 'Tree' by Giil

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Sep 13th 2008
Tags:
cheat dark and horror experimental free verse general human nature nature romance
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No, I didn't get hurt by a guy so don't ask.
I was in a pissy mood and this is the type of thing I write about when I'm in a pissy mood.

Comments

martysexylegs Says:

wow for not going thru that kinda situation you sure did write it brilliantly i it

Aidda Says:

Very nicely done