she was like a battle or more

by xenacreed

in Completed Works

< 'Chloe' by xenacreed

she was like a battle or more

she was like a battle or more like a war,
she sat upon the roof tops and cried forever more.
her eyes where green with anger her heart was black with hate,
until the day she meant him she was all but gone away.
he gave her things like poems with soft spoken words,
he gave her things like love and held her closer than he thought he could.
and on the day of her passing she poke but one name,
she asked him if he loved her, his replay was so true ,
he said my dear i loved you more than i ever knew,
i loved you like a rose with peddles on the floor i will love you like your immortal and forever more..
and at the moment that she left his eyes closed to,
for he had left with her in this wold they never really knew..
> 'Bent' by xenacreed

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Sep 10th 2008
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human nature love romance
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a very simple story of love

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xenaisback Says:

This is so beautiful, I could only wish I could write something like this.

Spikesbloodydame Says:

so like yea this was so freaking beautiful.

i have a tear running down my cheek right now. YOu are amazing roxy