City Of Never Ending Nights

by Donovon2001

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Sep 9th 2008
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Welcome to the City of never ending nights where the night literally never die. The town is semi technologically advanced but has no natural light besides the stars, the moon and the "night Lights" The Night Lights are rumored to be the souls drifting around the city. They say they are ghost of the few who died when the city was cursed. This is not true. No one knows what the sparkling eerie lights are. But they provide a little more light for the city. Problem is, most of the civilians are afraid of them. At a certain time, the NIght Lights appear and most of the citizens cower in their homes from their own superstition. Few young and more open minded children like this teenager aren’t afraid. Knowing he has a job as a newspaper boy, he's not only built a tolerance for them but altogether included them in his normal day. Coming across these things is no where near strange to him anymore.

Okay.. Real comments about this
I’m really proud. But im at the same time disappointed.
1. The background is cool but I felt I could a did better.
2. It doesn’t feel as apathetic as I hoped for.

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