Nameless

At the motel, the ambulance
came about, questioning the victim who
fell from a four story window. Instead
of putting the victim in a stretcher, they put
him in an old rusty chair. He squeaked that
he was alright, even though he was
bleeding. The victim’s wife threw some
spoiled orchids in the direction of the
ambulance that was now in
motion. The ambulance returned the next
day saying they forgot to ask what his
name was. The doctor had to put him in
a file called “nameless”. However, someone in
the hospital captured the victim. The victim
never returned.
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Sep 8th 2008
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This was another assignment given to me by my creative writing teacher. He read a poem to us, Aglow by Matthew Zapruder. We had to write down every word in the poem that interested us and write a poem using those words. This is mine and I thought it pretty much sucked at first but I realized that it's really not that bad. So enjoy.

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Onam iki t t y Says:

This is kinda confusing but I like the image of the rusty chair and the orchids...

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