Right Through Me

by Neji Luver101

in Completed Works

Right Through Me

Are you really there?
Have you ever cared,
Truly, for me?
Sometimes it's like you're
There, but you're not.
You can be standing,
Staring right at me,
But it's all an illusion;
You're staring right through me.

And the past years I've
Known you in school,
We shared secrets,
Ones we'd never told
Anyone else before.
But I guess that was
A waste of time,
'Cause even as we're
Both standing here in
The wind,
You get in your precious
Car and drive off,
Like you never knew me,
Leaving me to get soaked
As the skies open
Up and cry the tears
I refuse to shed.

So when my neon yellow
Meets the bright red
Of your precious car,
And the paint can
Meets the windshield,
I smile and lift my
Eyes to the diamond
Scattered sky and my
Mouth opens and I
Whisper,
"Revenge is sweeter
Than you ever were."

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Sep 1st 2008
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Here. I was in a bit of a dark mood...yeah. Hate, love, don't care. You're entitled to your opinion. Criticism is welcome

P.S. My inspiration comes from the song "Revenge is Sweeter Than You Ever Were/Revenge is Sweeter" by The Veronicas.

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