The Last Ballerina

by Aidda

in Poems

The Last Ballerina

I’ve got this great idea
We’ll put on a play tonight
We’ll do Romeo and Juliet
And this time we’ll make it right

Romeo can get the girl
Paris will not fall
And the Montagues and Capulets
Will not fight at all

We’ll have beautiful ballerinas
All dressed in white
And they’ll whirl across the stage
As if birds in flight

But fate will blacken our future
So don’t hold your breath
As the curtain falls, the last ballerina
Will dance herself to death.

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Aug 27th 2008
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ballerina death last philosophical
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Basically a metaphor to not matter what the plans are something will go wrong. I suppose it's loose, but I like this one anyway.

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xVampyRxPunkx Says:

This is amazing,how Shakespearean

Alexiel Krahe Says:

The last verse made my skin crawl. It's told so softly, like a happy-ending of a fairy tale, then the ending is rather cruel. I had in mind the image of a music box of the type that has a ballerina doll turning around on it, then falls.

TamaKit123 Says:

mew so cute and cruel

Vart Says:

the poem itself is great the imagery and everything BUT the first and third dun really rhyme it could be ur idea or just coincidence who knows