I won't lie to ya. This one was totally out of left field! I'm not even sure exactly how I came about with this idea, only that I've been kicking it around for a little while in my head. Anywho, I'll let the results speak for itself.
Haha, I thought it was quite good! A really fun concept behind it!
Although I felt the swearing wasn't really needed. It just felt a bit out of place for something as wacky as an evil bug in the cupboard.
Still good though! It'd be interesting to see more of it!
I agree with Saderox on the swearing, it felt out of place with the rest of it, and the rest of it was very funny, especially the last two lines. I also agree with Saerox that this concept should be continued.
Comments
Robber Baron Says:
I can't tell if I liked that or not.
Slayerkid12 Says:
Saderox Says:
Haha, I thought it was quite good! A really fun concept behind it!
Although I felt the swearing wasn't really needed. It just felt a bit out of place for something as wacky as an evil bug in the cupboard.
Still good though! It'd be interesting to see more of it!
ArianKing Says:
I agree with Saderox on the swearing, it felt out of place with the rest of it, and the rest of it was very funny, especially the last two lines.
I also agree with Saerox that this concept should be continued.
Cilmeron Says:
Exceedingly funny - I liked it :)
Fieryone Says:
"THE END IS NEAR HUMAN!"
"Not if you don't leave the damn closet! 8D"
"...I like the closet."
I lol'd hard at that.
Shadowii2 Says:
haha, the ending punchline definetely made my day, good work.
Great work once again Mav.