This is one of the many characters from my story. His name is Detaio Tiros. :)
I drew this on two A4-sized papers which were pasted together with tape X3 (you can see it in the scan still)
The feet were kinda cut off by the scanner, and I was too lazy to scan a third time, but anyway.. ^^:
I'm quite happy how it turned out :) Especially since I drew this character only once before; in November 2004 =>
*click here! But beware of giggling too hard 
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He changed quite a bit as character, but I never got to draw him again.. until now
Any critique appreciated!
Comments
EtherealMog Says:
Nice work on the anatomy and clothing designs overall.
Especially nice work defining the face, the facial hair and scar along with the facial anatomy really makes him quite a characteristic fellow, though the nose could do with being a little more curved- it's still quite good. The shading is really fitting also, the colour choice of earthy and muted tones compliment each other well.
Finally, I feel as though the sword and the shoulder guard could do with a little more 'weight', to give them substance in the piece, as they are looking a little bit thin. But lovely work overall!
Nicely done.
Minstrel Ayreon Says:
Nice expression and clothing!
The only thing I'm not entirely sure about is his height...to me, especially as you compare with further down around the legs, it kinda makes his head seem small. But otherwise, I am definitely liking this.
Lindale Says:
I really like his clothing design :) (Sorry, but I can't think of any critique
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Aw, wow. He looks like a real badass. I love 'im!
And that green is so vibrant! It really looks great.