this be a tune by XxCowMeatxX of newgrounds.com, I just did my vocal thing over it as usual
lyrics:
will there be any forgiveness?
is there a way to change?
don't you hear my repentance?
is this the end for me?
breathe in slow
let the feelings go
this is the way the they bring us back to our own end
with no hope for change, there is no change that we can make!
these are the times that try mens souls, searching for my atonement
these are the times that put our backs against the walls we will always be searching for my atonement!
bleeding our pain
let it rise again
let the poison take its course pressing through my veins and bury me
bury me
these are the times that try mens souls, searching for my atonement
these are the times that put our backs against the walls we will always be searching for my atonement!
check his stuff out at xxcowmeatxx.newgrounds.com
*EDIT*
fixed up the volumes on the vocals so you can hear the guitars better.
Comments
Cyril Says:
I can't hear the music underneath as well as I would like to. Sounds good, but... hmmm
Also, I don't know if I like the way the screaming works. Although as it is, (except for the volume problem) it sounds like Arch Enemy. I'm not fond of the way the vocals work with the guitar often times, but it's still good!
Oh well, I'm not the be all and the end all.
Machete Says:
This is really badass.
The melody of the vocals fit really well with the style of the music, and man...lyrics. Whoa dude.
Kick ass as usual.
Awesome job.
The Icee One Says:
i think it sounds like yuo're trying too hard..
speedmetalmessiah Says:
Pretty cool. Though I will say I think it'd have been better with the chorus sung and the screaming in the background supporting on the "my atonement" part. Just my thoughts though. Hope to hear some more shit soon.
KidDoom Says:
So Sexy, I Think, Maybe, They're Should have been more layers or more depth to the screaming in some parts, but I Think It Rocks My Socks none the less
Shodarkhorn Says:
There was far too much vocals cutting out the actual music and the volume for everything should have been cut down a bit to prevent speaker feedback.
The score is well written and deffinately has a grungy sound to it but the flaws make it less enjoyable then it really should be in the end.
Next track perhaps but not this one.
2 stars out of 5
Slayer of Trolls Says:
Sounds like melodic metal to me. Sounds wicked.