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Fallen Angel
Fallen Angel
My eyes opening slowly
The pain still running on my body
The sun never shined so brightly
I can feel my body moving so heavily
All my tries to get up just keep me down
The ground is not cloudy, its brown
I cant help it I can only frown
And with my own blood I drown
A loud and familiar voice filled with rut
“Go ahead try to fly now mutt
I cut down your very wings you smut
Go ahead try it to continue your strut
For your wings has been gut”
Suddenly I realized what I went thru
First I was up there in the sky blue
And I knew too much, I knew the true
Before I knew they started the pursue
Then they abandoned me with no clue
Filled with hatred for the divine
Yelling up to the flying shrine
“Come down here you swine
Take away your immortality and your shine
I’ll make you bleed and I’ll break your spine
There's no escape accept it and resign!!”
Getting up on my broken knees
Pointing to the skies with my pain at ease
Claiming wildly that there wont be appease
With a my eyes blinded by the light
Appears in front of me a shiny knight
I growl with my the increasing spite
Laughing at that ridiculous sprite
He says with his voice filled with fright
“You have claimed that you’re right
So I came down here and you I’ll smite
I’ll destroy you before its night
It’s too late for your contrite”
Before he could finish I leaped with no cower
Feeling in my arms this unknown power
I break his armor giving him time to glower
Smashing his head on the ground for an hour
Always with a big smile filled with dour
Look to his wings that I wildly devour
Yelling to the skies right on that spot
“Is this all that you got!!?
Is this really heavens best shot?!
I know there’s better in your plot!!”
That’s when I feel the strong wind
Yet again with the light I became blind
Anger and pity coming up intertwined
This person that actually I reminded
The person said in a loud and clear
“I gave you the ultimate chance to adhere
But you didn’t, you preferred to sheer
And now I’ll end with this problem here”
Keeping myself calm I said between groans
“You stand there thinking you’re on your throne
But you have no chance, not alone
I’ll show you pain like never was shown”
Running up to him and in a gracious spin
With a strength not known to my kin
And with the power of my sin
I manage to pin him down and grin
“Now you’ll feel your pain”
Suddenly it starts to rain
And to that tree him I chain
Ripping out each of his veins
Laughing almost turning insane
“Don’t you wish you could be slain?”
Beating his head on the tree till I see his brain
Giggling and laughing to the blood stains
Whispering close to his ear
“You know what you have to do, dear
You’re just filled with this horrid fear
Just accept your fate and hear
There’s no escape not for you, not here”
Closing his eyes he finally understood
And he just did what he could
Giving up on his immortality as he should
And there grinning I stood
Giving him the finishing blow desired to kings
With my hands so fast the air sings
Ripping off each of his wings
Ending with his life strings
After that I fall down to the ground
With the big horrible sound
And there my peace I finally found
My blood slowly starts to end on my wound
And I slowly lose conscience on that mound
In my brief moment of glory
For those I killed for quarry
Now all of us perish gory
I realize that the rest is story
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Comments
yumi56 Says:
wow...that's really sad and good at the same time....
DemonLuvr Says:
I like the details~
hyperactiveice Says:
Ooh~ I... I can most definately imagine the scenes taking place.

I like the little scene that you created.
But it's so sad, and lovely.
Poor little angel.
vampire209 Says:
Wow amazing but so many ryhmes my head is spinning

flashbackbingo Says:
It's a good tale and well-told.

I'm just not really one for rhymes... but it was epic and tragic and very good!!
Aidda Says:
Long, but amazing! Interesting use of different lengths of rhyming stanzas. Quite an interesting story.
IamDarkElf Says:
So moving. So interesting. So vivid. So ... so ... long!
Anyways, good job Varty. Very expressive.
Xriinova Says:
Hm, interesting. Weird, but good. It is a nice poem, but just really different. That's not a bad thing.
Nightstar Says:
Epic, amazing. Great job.