(Any thoughts on one)

by King Ace

in Works in Progress

(Any thoughts on one)

(Title help please)

“Like dude, be careful!” yelled Marquee screaming to his friend on the edge of the cliff.

“Dude don’t worry, nothing bad will happen.” James retorted. But he lost his footing and slipped down the rocky edge into the ravine.

“Ah s***, James!” Screamed Marquee as he ran to the edge but couldn’t find his friend…

3 Years Later

“So how is she doc?” Marquee asked.

“She should be fine, but she keeps ranting on about her son or something. Maybe you could bring him in here?” The doctor asked.

“Her son, James, died about three years back in a tragic accident” Marquee said in a sad tone.

“Oh I’m so sorry for bringing that up, but I just assumed that he was living because she’s ranting about him and seeing him.” The doctor replied sincerely and with infancies on ‘seeing’.

“Maybe she has finally lost it, she had a heart attack and went into shock when she heard the news about her son, so I am surprised she made it this long.” said Marquee. The doctor closed the cell and motioned Marquee to follow him out.

“Marquee…” Whispered a ghostly tone. “Marquee…”

“Wha… who… what’s there?” Marquee said as the voice woke him from slumber.
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Aug 3rd 2008
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So yeah, I was reading 's void (Really good, I'd advise checking it out) and was about to start reading dagger and blade as I had promised I would once when I found a small crack in my writers block. So yeah, tell me what you think.

Um... any ideas for a title?

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Bass clarinetgal2708 Says:

Pretty good so far. ^-^ What (or who) is the ghostly voice?