aww hahaha that's so cute that you made that for you and your friend to enjoy! Everyone likes eye candy.
Okay if ya like one: well with the pants where the crotch is suppose to be, you need to give his "mr. man" some air how about bringing that line a tad bit. Now as for the over all proportion, try this website: http://www.mangarevolution.com/tutorial_display.php?tutorial_id=38
I wanted to scan in some pages from my tutorial book for you but at this moment i'm no where near it so I decided to direct you somewhere that can help a bit. Now the thing I want you to pay attention to the most is the lines the artists make before darkening it...it's kind of like a basis for your art ya know. Also when drawing try using a real life human reference and draw what you see, not what you think is right okay.
I wasn't going to put this in my gallery, but I really need some critiques for it.
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Sanchu Says:
Okay if ya like one: well with the pants where the crotch is suppose to be, you need to give his "mr. man" some air
I wanted to scan in some pages from my tutorial book for you but at this moment i'm no where near it so I decided to direct you somewhere that can help a bit. Now the thing I want you to pay attention to the most is the lines the artists make before darkening it...it's kind of like a basis for your art ya know. Also when drawing try using a real life human reference and draw what you see, not what you think is right okay.