TGR - The great rebellion Page 1 Redo.. again

WOO. Page.. uh.. Page 1.
Sorry for such a drastic wait. Like I said. I had this problem. The person who decided to join my, " team " was working on page five, lalalalala, then she quit before finishing due to wolf fandom attacking her, then she came back, and said that she actually was never finished with page 5, and she had some things she had to do. ( she told the same thing to ashley ). Then came up with her quitting the wolf fandom again, and the comic. I asked her for the page, she said she deleted it. That she never told me that she said it was almost done and that I was putting words in her mouth. So I was all, ahh, forget this.
So yes, it is back to me and ashley. She actually pulled this page together pretty fast, and I thank her so damn much for all of this.
Please don't comment on this story. It is jsut to let you guys know what happened. No responses on what happened. Thank you.

All over again. I told you guys.. that I will be redoing everything.. all.. over.. again.
And I deleted the old pages, so new comers won't have any sneak peaks.
So if you know what happens next....... SHHHHHHHHHH.

Anywho. About this page, neh?
Well. As you can see, I took some tips from the first comment I got on this page from colonel-strawberry.deviantart.com
About the whole, get rid of the tip tap walkingg thing, ahve a nice full view of the background yada yada, and make botolf run away, showing that he left and stuffs.
Then I also took a good crit from plaguedog.deviantart.com about the eye thing, and where I should put, " Beth " And lalalala.
And finally. I took most help, from a very very great critic :flaresdemise.deviantart.com
They helped me with some flaws and anatomy shits.
I'm sorry, Flare. I couldn't edit the jaw in the last panel.
*FAIL*

now. About the plot thingy going on in this page.
Beth is watching sunset blahblahblah. But then someone calls her. Beth? Oh god, she doesnt want to be disturbed, so she has this, omfg, what the hell do you want BEYOTCH?! lulz. He tells her this and that, and yes. she did fall for it. She sent like, the papck into a battle when moro really didnt ask for it. x.x she really needs to stop trusting people so easy, MANN.
So tina is happy. Why?
Ok. I shall spoil it. It is, like she says, a plan to get on with her rebellion. But beth is always getting in her way, since well, Beth's rank is also beta, as well as tina. And... beth is higher then her. So, with that, Beth kinda gets in tina's way with all this shiiieeet. So she needs to find a way to get her off that rank. - cough - ANYWAY.
That's it for this page.

BTWThese wolves work differently then your average pack of wolves. They live along side with anthro's, so they changed their ways drastically. I'll explain more into that, in the comic cover. Which is next, instead of page 2.

So. With that.....
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Ok, moment over. But yes. Please comment. Fav, too!
Buuuut jyeah. Me and Ashley worked hard on this flippin page. So we need all the feedback we can get!

Backgrounds and shading by: xashleymx.deviantart.com
speech bubbles, Lineart, coloring, art, and story by: ME