Sorry for the poor quality... I still do not have access to a scanner :(. I am not sure if I am done with the image, it is from this story I was working on a while back I am pondering going back to working on it not sure if I will yet. I thought I should work on this because Kaori (Madamboss) liked the initial concept I came up with for a fan art I am doing for her but I needed a break from that project. Hopefully this keeps her happy until I can work out the issues I am having with that...
Anywhoo... please give me feedback
.gif "Nudge nudge, wink wink ;)")
I know those wings are not 100% even I was trying to make it look like the broken wing was at a different angle but I think I failed at pulling it off :(
Comments
BracingHope Says:
wow this is amazing! absolutely awesome!!!
red kiss Says:
OMG! Greattt job on this!
The Icee One Says:
just great!!
Kaori Night Says:
Looking REALLY good here. Basically all perfect. finish it so I can fave!
solimphade Says:
Oh yeah. Sorry, I saw this earlier and had to run out of the house then forgot. >>;
Lessee... I'd say it looks pretty good for the most part.
All I'd change is to make the widest point at her hips (sort of below her crotch level) a little more spread out. Right now it's too sudden, and the rest of her outer thigh is too narrow, mostly just on the right side though. The left looks okay.
That, and maybe do a leeeeettle more work on her hands to make the positioning of her fingers clear on the right side. And bring her middle left finger up a bit. If you look at your own fist when the fingers are curled (I'm assuming guys' and girls' hands have this in common), the middle finger sits a bit higher than the rest.
Keep in mind though, this is just me nitpicking. >>;
It looks bloody awesome!
Great job on the shading, etc.
DarkRubyEyz Says:
WTH are you talking about? Proportionally teh HIPS ARE FINE geeez. -.-;