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Marshmallow
Marshmellow
A touch of a grey sky
Fading into
A feel of black
As they swirl into some grassy green,
Winter white and all blue diamonds
Twisted and furious
Tasting of kiwi and strawberry
Temptation and sin with a short altitude
One look up from the floor
You can see lust and beauty
But it’s the place of birth
And the pleasure of many
Yet it’s the pain for the lost
Innocents abandon when finding the sanctuary
Screwed up and savoring it all
Being so damn clever
The demon within the angel
Men, boys and young girls beware of the lingering appetite of the goddess
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Comments
Der Sensenmann Says:
Temptation and sin with a short altitude
One look up from the floor
You can see lust and beauty
But it’s the place of birth
And the pleasure of many
That's some wizard writing, right there.
The piece in it's entirety is surprisingly eloquent for the subject matter.
I'm not so sure if it was clear enough in it's meaning, but you closed it fairly well.
Nanook Says:
Dude, don't tell me what it's about.
I'm supposed to work it out for myself!
Geez, where's the fun in this now...
Uh, marshmallow is spelled with an "a", isn't it?