To help or not to help that's a tough choice when some people actually need help while others abuse people's generosity. Yes critisim is apprechiated however i don't care for ppl to ramble on and on about what i was missing for the form and structure and blah blah blah. I'm all for expressing myself and free form is what i do
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Hitaru Higakura Says:
Ah, yes, I feel that way a lot when I walk around downtown... It's heartbreaking because you never know what they're going to do with that 5$ you gave them. Will they gamble, drink, or save? Hm...
BLAckFOx626 Says:
"15 freakin cents!!!!!!!!!!!.call up three friends get a nickle each."that's what i thought after reading no i'm only kidding.i feel u on this issue it is tuff.people abuse others kindness way to much.
I feel like throwing on some shades and beating on some bongos.
Nice poem Penny Proud.
dreno360 Says:
Great stuff girl! That is something to think about. Some people really need help, while others are just trying to get what they can...